poem+=)

Hye there!!

I have uploaded two poem with the tittle of "How Do I Love Thee" and "The Flag of the Free". Frankly speaking, this is my first time recite and record the poems..it sound so weird for me...hehe..i try to read as best i can do..please leave your comment =)


 * How Do I Love Thee?** by Elizabeth Barrett Browning:

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 * Flag of the Free** by Walter Taylor Field

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= COMMENTS: =

** SHIRA SAYS: **

 * 1) ====** volume- the volume for first poem is little bit slow, but the volume of second poem is high and clear. **====
 * 2) ====** pitch- I think you make different and varies pitch for both poem. I can heard an improvement compare to previous record. **====
 * 3) ====** rate-the rate is reasonable and make us easy to understand your voice. **====
 * 4) ====** emotion- you should follow the romantic emotion in first poem and patriotic feeling in second poem.but, sometime, you manage to do it. **====
 * 5) ====** pronunciation- you must practice more on pronunciation, since the word sometimes be confused. **====

FARA:
 * 1) volume: i think the volume is clear enough.
 * 2) pitch: there is less varies of pitch for these poem.
 * 3) rate: the rate is constant.
 * 4) emotion: i think there is some romantic and patriotic emotion but it is not constant.
 * 5) pronunciation: i must do a lot of practice because the word is confusing.

amy:

 * 1) volume: the volume is quite clear
 * 2) pitch: lack of varies for pitch
 * 3) rate: not really constant
 * 4) emotion: need to be more romantic.
 * 5) pronunciation: need to practice more with the pronunciation