angry

Hai there!! This is my second task that given by madam Ainol. I have chosen a anger news with title of 'Slashed for Wanting to Feed Baby'. I had tried my best to put some anger emotion in this recording. I hope you can value give some comment regarding my mp3.

Slashed for Wanting to Feed Baby

 * ALOR STAR:** A housewife who was allegedly attacked by her husband's second wife on Friday, said she was slashed with a parang in the face and then choked.

Siti Aminah Hanapi, 50, said the incident happened at their house in Kampung Seri Muda, Sungai Korok in Jitra.

She said it started when she and her two daughters asked the woman, who had recently moved in with the family, if the could feed her baby boy.

"My husband was away and the woman was in the room with her son. When we asked if we could feed her son, she told me to get her baby from the room.

" When I entered the room, she was holding a parang and swung it at me.

"Just go and die".... That was what I heard," Siti Aminah said.

Siti Aminah's daughter, Nurul Shuhada Saad, 17 dragged her mother out of the house despite being slashed and a neighbour send them to Jitra Hospital.

Nurul Shuhada received more than 10 stitches on the right foot.

Siti Aminah received 18 stitches on the forehead and another 24 on the right cheek.

Police said the woman was detained at her relatives' house in Kuala Nerang near hear at 3pm yesterday.

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//**COMMENT:**//

// AMY: //

=== // 1. volume-the voice are not really clear and sometimes it too slow. // === === // 2. pitch- you didn't sound like you're angry but more too sad and sometimes you press your voice at certain part for the angry looks. // === === // 3. rate-need to more practice playing with anger emotion. // === === // 4. emotion-it doesn't sound really angry in your voice but it sound sad. // === === // 5. pronunciation- there are still some mistakes in the pronunciation. // ===

**Fara:**
 * 1) **volume: i think sometimes the volume of my voice is too slow.**
 * 2) ** pitch: i don't think it sound sad, but too constant. **
 * 3) ** rate: i can't maintain the anger emotion till the end of the recording. **
 * 4) ** emotion: lack of upset voice. **
 * 5) ** pronunciation: my pronunciation still weak and i need to improve it. **

** SHIRA SAYS: **

 * 1) ====** volume- the volume is a little bit slow **====
 * 2) ====** pitch-you can achieve high pitch and low pitch at certain time. **====
 * 3) ====** rate-the rate is okay **====
 * 4) ====** emotion-i can't differentiate whether you make sad voice or angry voice **====
 * 5) ====** pronunciation- need practice to improve..for example, you pronounce wrongly for word "swung" **====