my+first+trial


 * BOY SURVIVES THREE DAYS ADRIFT AT SEA**

MANILA: A 15-year-old schoolboy, who was sent alone to sea by his grandmother to fish, survived three days adrift after his boat engine failed, authorities said yesterday. The hungry, thirsty and exhausted boy, Mark Sanico, washed ashore aboard his tiny dugout in the central city of Danao on Thursday, and is recovering at hospital, said police office Cherry Panares. "He was very weak. He had no food or drink for three days. He said he had some boiled ground corn, but it spoiled early so he had nothing to eat," Panares said. The big waves meant he could not cast his net to get food, she added. Clad only in a shirt and shorts, the boy told police the boat had drifted at least 90km across the Camotes Sea from his coastal hometown of Villaba on Leyte island.

===Hai, this is my first record. I think this is the best one from the other mp3 that I make. Its don't sound happy I think. But i had try my best to deliver this news in happy voice. I hope you can leave your comment about this record and how I can improve my skill in public speaking. =)===


 * ===Amy: I think you do sound happy at a certain part but it didn't constant. Maybe the article is not so happy. I'm sorry, just giving my opinion, anyway good job dear. Let us practice more. =)===
 * ===shira: maybe the news not really happy I guess...and your voice has same intonation. but you had try your best, keep it up...you can do it !!!===


 * AMY: **
 * 1) ===** volume- the volume of your voice is too slow....you need to talk more louder. **===
 * 2) ===** pitch- the pitch is okay. **===
 * 3) ** rate- the rate of your happiness is still low. You need to find article that more happy. **
 * 4) ** emotion- there is lack of emotion in your voice. **
 * 5) ** pronunciation- the pronunciation is okay but still can be improvement. **

** SHIRA SAYS: **

 * 1) ====** volume- I think your voice already loud. **====
 * 2) ====** pitch-the pitch still have a problem. you need to practice more to varies your pitch. **====
 * 3) ====** rate-you give a clear voice by talk in suitable rate and make people easily understand what you said **====
 * 4) ====** emotion- you need to practice more to make happy voice **====
 * 5) ====** pronunciation- sorry to say, but I heard your English sound Kelantanese in your pronunciation. maybe you can practice more to improve it. **====


 * Fara **
 * 1) Volume: i think my voice is not clear enough. I got some problem with my microphone because i am lack of experience in recording my own voice.
 * 2) pitch: the pitch is quite okay.
 * 3) rate: the rate is not too happy because the article is not too happy. I should select and find another article that more happy.
 * 4) emotion: lack of emotion and i should practice more to improved it.
 * 5) pronunciation: my pronunciation is too weak and i must practice more.